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  1. When the Devil Came to Florence
  2. Story 2
  3. Story 3

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When the Devil Came to Florence (cntd)

ilnovellatore:

When the Devil Came to Florence (cntd)

1. Light winds from Venezia  

If there was one thing that Michele Cellini knew, it was that, should there ever be some sort of mass riot against the notorious idiocy that was the Alessandro Foscari, he would be leading it. 

But, despite Michele’s fervent wishes, there wasn’t a mass riot. There wasn’t even a communal grumble. Alessandro Foscari, for all his insufferable nature, was loved by the people of Firenze. Hailing from the Venetian shores of the Adriatic, he had carried with him all the charm and the grandeur of the Empire. An apt swordsman with a sharp mind and a sharper tongue, he was welcomed into Firenze’s arms like a long lost lover. 

Why this was had been beyond Michele. Somehow, the Foscari boy was even immune to the authorities. Every time he swept past in the street, with his infernal cape blazing its usual trail, it was the equivalent of his rubbing Michele’s face in the mud. His flagrant disregard for the sumptuary laws was, quite frankly, offensive and despite Michele’s protests - no one seemed to give a damn.

Now, Michele liked to think of himself as an open-minded, modern, young man, embracing the suddenly closer world that new trade routes brought - after all this was the 15th century. Be it the Neapolitans or even the Ottomans, he had found himself willing to learn of their ways. Not for any higher moral purpose, he had to admit, but it was excellent for trade. But despite all of this, he drew the line at Foscari. He absolutely drew the line.

That man seemed to taunt him in a silent way that made his blood boil. “Buongiorno, messere.” He would simper all too familiarly, nod his head with the slightest jaunt of disrespect that made Michele’s eyes twitch with fury.  

Good god how he just wanted to run that man through.

He cursed the day it had all started. Cursed it to hell and back. Whatever he had done in a past life must surely have been terrible for God to send the devil in the form of that man. What had been a beautiful spring morning had turned bitter by the time the sun slipped behind the horizon.

He remembered it clearly. It had been a day where the season wasn’t quite sure if it were Spring or Summer, where the usual, stagnant heat had been whirled away by a light wind. It was the usual lazy day. He was meant to be helping his Father with the accounts, but, as usual, that plan never transpired. Instead, he had spent the large part of the day with his brothers, Niccolo and Luca, lounging about in the shade underneath Il Campanile. Niccolo, the eldest, had been catcalling to whichever woman he was now madly in love with when the hideous shadow of the Venetian began to descend onto Firenze’s doorstep. 

“A gentleman, a gentleman!”  Children in rags called, spilling out of the alleyways like an infestation of happy rats. 

“Che?” 

Heads turned and conversation lit up like candles in the street. 

“Dove? Dove?” 

Michele clicked his tongue in disapproval while his brothers lifted their heads high in interest.  Folding his arms,  he stepped out of the shade, pretending to look uniterested as he scanned for signs of movement along the horizon. Where would this one be from? Further into Toscana? Roma? The Republic of Siena? He had to admit, the excitement in the streets was infectious. So much so, it surely had to be someone of relative importance. 

The children in rags were still scrabbling around and squawking like pigeons, jumping to and fro as figures began to form in the watery haze of heat. The sure and steady sound of metal hooves on dust and cobbles began to rise from the distance along with the clatter of coins and cheers of children. 

“Luca,” Michele said quietly, shielding his eyes from the sun, “Go and see who it is.” 

Luca, the youngest, shot Michele a bemused look. His mouth drawing into a taunt line as he switched his gaze between his two brothers. 

“Am I a dog?”

“You bark like one. Go.” Michele said again, slapping him over the back of the head as he turned back to Niccolo. 

Niccolo’s  snorts of laughter echoed off the walls, his nostrils quivering as their youngest brother, with his pride severely wounded, limped off into the fray of excitement. The sun darted off of his blue doublet and the light brown of his hair, shot with gold he had inherited from their mother. He was craning his neck, pushing gently past bystanders as the figure continued to move closer and closer. 

“Venezia!” Cried a single voice, further in the distance. 

“Venezia!” Luca echoed to his brothers, shouting past the hand cupped to the side of his mouth. 

Un Veneziano?” Niccolo spluttered, his mouth gaping. “Here?” He signalled back, his arm flailing wildly as he pointed to the floor to reiterate his question.

Luca nodded, grinning like a fool, as he moved his tongue into the side of his cheek and began to make one of the most vulgar motions either of his brothers have ever seen. Niccolo rolled his eyes as Michele snorted. It went without saying that a Venetian’s wealth would make anyone’s eyes water, but the ferocity of the action Luca was performing indicated something even beyond that. 

Before Michele could tell Luca to climb further, another cheer had erupted from the children. A now visible spray of gold flew up into the air, glittering fiercely in the early morning sun before it hit the ground with a collective clatter against the cobble stones. As the crowd ducked to scavenge them, the man responsible for the shower of florins came into view. 

On the back of a richly decorated brown horse, sat a young noble in even richer decoration. By Michele’s guess his doublet alone was worth more than his father’s entire business. It was the richest purple any of the brothers had ever seen, the expense of it was making Niccolo’s eyes visibly sting. A mane of  hair of such a rich brown it almost verged on black was tied back in a poor attempt to control it. The cape thrown over his right shoulder moved slightly as his horse pushed forward, the winged lion of Venice emblazoned on the silk. 

Michele clicked his tongue in disapproval, pointing to Niccolo as he cursed under his breath. 

“Would you look at that. I can’t count on my fingers how many times he has broken the sumptuary laws. Look at him. Peacock.”

Niccolo smiled back, patting his younger brother on the shoulder. “Jealousy does not suit you well, fratello. You are too quick to judge, as usual. You know nothing of him.” 

“I know enough by that smug expression.”

Inanimate Objects

ilnovellatore:

Its strange how inanimate objects can hold so much. Not in an obvious, literal way, like boxes or chests but in an emotional way. Some objects are like puddles of memories. All you have to do is hold them, dip into them, and the memories flush back into your mind, a mess of vibrant colours sounds and long forgotten sights. 

A young woman rubbed her thumb over the cool, engraved metal lid of a locket and chain someone had once given her. She closed her eyes and scrunched up the grass underneath her toes on a park bench. They juttered at first, creeping out like unsure creatures, from the dormant corners of her mind. Then they began to slip - colours first, sounds and finally pictures and images burst behind her eyelids. 

The light sound of long-forgotten funfair music reeled about in her mind, tumbling and tumbling as she remembered each step she had taken amongst the place. A warmth tickled her wrist in the memory of her grandfather’s comforting and guiding hand. His skin had been like paper and had had a muted roughness that told its own stories of his past. Men on stilts that seemed to extend far into the heavens had astounded her, still holding on in amazement and an unknown giddy mixture of fear and excitement. 

It was at the fair her grandfather had won her the locket. It had shone on the prizes shelf, its silver reflecting the striped banners of the game tent. Not a single coconut was left standing after her grandfather had demolished them. Then, with the greatest smile, a great gleaming, wrinkled smile, he had slipped the chain around her head and lifted her onto his shoulders like a friendly paper giant. 

The sudden sound of a dog barking in its own stupid happiness jolted the memory out of her mind. Her eyes were slightly damp, but there was a smile on her face. The sun beat down on her back as she gathered up her shoes and slipped the locket back into the pocket of her trousers. 

Its strange how inanimate objects can hold so much. 

theliterarysnob:

that70srpc:

I find that, when writing bios, it’s really helpful to look at a list or a chart like the one above. Picking two or three traits from each chart and building a character based around them will give you a really interesting bio, because they will serve as a reminder that characters need depth and dimension.

Independent and clever.

VS.

Independent, clever, pretentious, and stubborn.

The first combination doesn’t come with any flaws, whereas the second will provide a more dynamic character.

This advice reminds me of playing The Sims (yup I’m that much of a nerd). I once was advised that when choosing personality traits for your sims always make sure at least 1 out of 5 of the traits is something negative or undesirable. It’ll make your sim a lot more interesting and realistic.

The same is true for the characters in your story. There’s a reason why the term mary-sue is used with so much disdain.

great reminder x

(Source: dunst-rph, via yeahwriters)

Check it out » YEAH WRITE!: Kurt Vonnegut’s 8 Tips on How to Write a Great Story

yeahwriters:

  1. Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.
  2. Give the reader at least one character he or she can root for.
  3. Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water.
  4. Every sentence must do one of two things: reveal…

Write about a locket that holds sentimental value for someone. What makes it meaningful? How did the person come about it? Was the necklace a gift? Did it belong to someone important? 

(Source: get-scribbling)

Inanimate Objects

Its strange how inanimate objects can hold so much. Not in an obvious, literal way, like boxes or chests but in an emotional way. Some objects are like puddles of memories. All you have to do is hold them, dip into them, and the memories flush back into your mind, a mess of vibrant colours sounds and long forgotten sights. 

A young woman rubbed her thumb over the cool, engraved metal lid of a locket and chain someone had once given her. She closed her eyes and scrunched up the grass underneath her toes on a park bench. They juttered at first, creeping out like unsure creatures, from the dormant corners of her mind. Then they began to slip - colours first, sounds and finally pictures and images burst behind her eyelids. 

The light sound of long-forgotten funfair music reeled about in her mind, tumbling and tumbling as she remembered each step she had taken amongst the place. A warmth tickled her wrist in the memory of her grandfather’s comforting and guiding hand. His skin had been like paper and had had a muted roughness that told its own stories of his past. Men on stilts that seemed to extend far into the heavens had astounded her, still holding on in amazement and an unknown giddy mixture of fear and excitement. 

It was at the fair her grandfather had won her the locket. It had shone on the prizes shelf, its silver reflecting the striped banners of the game tent. Not a single coconut was left standing after her grandfather had demolished them. Then, with the greatest smile, a great gleaming, wrinkled smile, he had slipped the chain around her head and lifted her onto his shoulders like a friendly paper giant. 

The sudden sound of a dog barking in its own stupid happiness jolted the memory out of her mind. Her eyes were slightly damp, but there was a smile on her face. The sun beat down on her back as she gathered up her shoes and slipped the locket back into the pocket of her trousers. 

Its strange how inanimate objects can hold so much. 

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